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10 November 2005 @ 11:43 am
 
I'm traveling through Canaan, through Jordan, through Lebanon-
The dust stings my eyes, clouds the senses.
This is ash. This is ancient.
The cinders of civilization lost.
I feel no connection, no verdant growth, no vibrance...
...but the whisper of a memory I never had.
Dark, secret eyes and foreign knowledge haunts me
here in this quietude where life begins but death has claimed.
Oh, fertile cradle
Oh, Mother- in trust and in ruin.
The junction of the holy and the sacred and the desperate and the vile.
We do not know (how could we?) the honesty of origin.
We will kill our brothers-
-and we will kill ourselves.
Is that the magic then?
And we have become Cane.
 
 
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Tequila: angel of music[info]freestallion on November 10th, 2005 08:50 pm (UTC)
your poetry is beautiful. I really love it all.

i friended you, add me :-p
god_andthe_muse[info]god_andthe_muse on November 10th, 2005 10:16 pm (UTC)
thank you, so much! and yes, consider yourself friended.
fricitive stuck out: ducks[info]shuck_spit on November 12th, 2005 01:21 am (UTC)
This is arresting. I'd love to workshop one of your poems sometime - something that you think could use some tinkering. Have you been to the livepoets community? There are some highschoolish posters for sure, but lots of poets (roseross, katherine_carla, therepublican, herb_lehman etc)who give evenhanded, thought-provoking criticism.
god_andthe_muse[info]god_andthe_muse on November 14th, 2005 01:59 pm (UTC)
wow, thank you so much. I'll go check out the livepoets community.
I'd LOVE intelligent criticism on my stuff. I want to get better.
fricitive stuck out: ducks[info]shuck_spit on November 15th, 2005 01:57 am (UTC)
It's the best one I've found. Also, I think that giving feedback has helped me get better. Bonus. Anyway, you're welcome.
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